how can i remake this sound

i tried doing it but it sounds a bit off still…there’s something too strong about the first sound

First sound on this audio clip is the target…second one is my attempt

https://whyp.it/tracks/40298/ee?token=qTPQZ

You’re definitely on the right track, the source sounds a bit grittier so feel free to add distortion and/or try different wave forms, maybe even a little Fm could do the trick! Not exactly sure what might get you closer, good luck and welcome to the forum :slight_smile: