how can i remake this sound

i tried doing it but it sounds a bit off still…there’s something too strong about the first sound

First sound on this audio clip is the target…second one is my attempt

You’re definitely on the right track, the source sounds a bit grittier so feel free to add distortion and/or try different wave forms, maybe even a little Fm could do the trick! Not exactly sure what might get you closer, good luck and welcome to the forum :slight_smile: